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zebrachikodoom
10-14-2002, 01:42 PM
anyone on long island , can you help me with writing music?
here is a song that i wrote and i would to see music done to it
here it goes it's call " Hey hey love"

I was there frozen still,
But I was so warm inside,
You have some kinda power over me,
That I know I have to hide,

Hey hey love,
You broke my heart,
You'll never know it,
Cause I'll never show it,
And it's not your fault,

I wish that my only wish will come true,
But, I know that in this life,
It won't be you,
That is why,

Hey hey love,
You broke my heart again,
In your eyes so true blue,
It won't be you,

My love always breaks my heart,
I'm just a fool,
To be in love with you,
But as long as you're my friend,
That's all that I need,
And I know you'd never mean to break my heart,
But, you'll never know it,
Cause I'll never show it,
Cause it's not your fault,

Hey hey love,
You broke my heart again,
And you'll never know it,
Cause I'll never show it ,
It's not your fault,


i don't know if i'm done with the lyrics yet,opinion;s are more than welcome, thanks, love, christine

zebrachikodoom
10-14-2002, 05:34 PM
bobby i'm still on the computer did you read this?

zebrachikodoom
10-14-2002, 06:11 PM
this could be a message board project for the long islanders, and maybe the new orleans part of the board and anywhere else, could do a song and we could have a contest and have randy be the judge!

OU812
10-14-2002, 06:13 PM
here is the drum beats bass drum snare bass drum bass drum snare bass drum snare .

zebrachikodoom
10-14-2002, 06:22 PM
thanks ou812, i really to do something with it, the song means alot to me

OU812
10-14-2002, 06:32 PM
what kind of song are you looking for slow fast heavy??

LessPaull
10-14-2002, 09:43 PM
Consider it done !! I can either Rock it out or 12 string acoustic melody OR do you want a Gangster Rap ???

Sue
10-14-2002, 11:35 PM
No rap...its against our religion.

ZEBRAFREAK
10-15-2002, 12:22 AM
HAS TO BE ROCK BALLAD!!!

OU812
10-15-2002, 12:59 AM
out right 666 trash metal i say.

LessPaull
10-15-2002, 03:58 AM
christine...I'll do an acoustic melody with a hard edge !! I think I know what your lookin for !! BUT!! Only Message Board (including you & sue) musicians can get together & record this !! I think we'll have a home run !!I think we need some Cajun influences!!hey OU812 ...can you play the washboard ?? spoons?? or the fishscale ??

zebrachikodoom
10-15-2002, 07:57 AM
bobby had it ,a rock ballad

zebrachikodoom
10-15-2002, 03:35 PM
what does everyone think of this?

zebrachikodoom
10-15-2002, 03:37 PM
Originally posted by zebrachikodoom
this could be a message board project for the long islanders, and maybe the new orleans part of the board and anywhere else, could do a song and we could have a contest and have randy be the judge!

what about this idea?

zebrachikodoom
10-15-2002, 03:38 PM
Originally posted by LessPaull
christine...I'll do an acoustic melody with a hard edge !! I think I know what your lookin for !! BUT!! Only Message Board (including you & sue) musicians can get together & record this !! I think we'll have a home run !!I think we need some Cajun influences!!hey OU812 ...can you play the washboard ?? spoons?? or the fishscale ??

like a take your fingers from my hair kinda thing slow for verses and heaveey for the chorus

yleekiyote
10-15-2002, 03:45 PM
Sounds like a cool contest, I'm in. I'll start writing something. I know we have the drums taken care of between OU812 and myself. Where's our guitarist, and keyboardist here in N.O.? Sound off, the challenge is out there. Something to do while we wait.

zebrachikodoom
10-15-2002, 04:16 PM
someone has to ask randy if he'd be the judge though

OU812
10-15-2002, 05:24 PM
will he give you 3 and 3 quarter stars

EVHFV
10-18-2002, 04:30 PM
I actually love those lyrics. I instantly got a melody in my head, along with a chord progression. It seemed to work. At the moment, I have no recording equipment, but plan to in the near future. If and when I can complete music for this and record it, I'll let you know and send it to you. I'm sure others will do something with it before I do, but if you like it, that's cool with me.

zebrachikodoom
10-18-2002, 04:39 PM
thanks alot evh those lyric's mean alot to me, but i think less paull is working on something, in your'e in ct?!? i used to live in newington. why don't you email your idea to less paull maybe the two of you guys could work on it!

EVHFV
10-18-2002, 05:56 PM
Yeah, I'm in CT, just west of Hartford by about 15 miles. Yeah, I knew a few others had ideas they were going to try. I just figured I'd give my own shot as well. I'll copy the lyrics and start writing my musical ideas to them as soon as I can. That's why I say I'd just try on my own eventually, because I don't know how far off that would be, and I wouldn't want to delay anyone else's progress. But I could ping-pong ideas with Less just the same and see what comes of it. It couldn't hurt having several different songs with the same lyrics, just to see what variations come of it. I'll definitley keep you updated on my ideas!

ZEBRAFREAK
10-19-2002, 10:38 PM
I GOT YOUR BEATS AND JOHNNY WILL WRITE THE MUSIC...
I GOT A BASSPLAYER IF WE DON'T HAVE A MESSAGE BOARD BASSIST!!!

OU812
10-22-2002, 01:39 AM
WE CAN CALL ROB AND FAB TO SING THE SONG. GIRL YOU KNOW ITS TRUE

zebrachikodoom
10-22-2002, 07:57 AM
Originally posted by ZEBRAFREAK
I GOT YOUR BEATS AND JOHNNY WILL WRITE THE MUSIC...
I GOT A BASSPLAYER IF WE DON'T HAVE A MESSAGE BOARD BASSIST!!!

i'm a bassplayer but i'm not that good

zebrachikodoom
10-22-2002, 08:08 AM
randy emailed me yesterday about the lyric's and he likes them and asked if there was music with them. i replied with no not yet but johnny and bobby are helping with it . maybe we could gert randy to help too,{yeah right} lol

zebrachikodoom
02-25-2003, 03:41 PM
yeah what happened to this?

rob
02-25-2003, 04:31 PM
i agree rock ballad. i like the lyrics girl. good job. you layed your heart out there.

yleekiyote
02-26-2003, 12:02 AM
Ok Zebrachickodoom, I re-wrote your lyrics a little and added a few more lines. I'm not finished:

I was standing there, frozen still,
But I felt so warm inside.
You got some strange power over me,
That I know you can not hide.

It seems all a mystery
That I was feeling once alive.
But you stole my dignity,
You left me here, hopeless to survive.

But now your gone, and I feel so alone.
In this game that you've played
You left me here, like a stone
With shattered dreams, with my heart that you've made

Hey, hey love
You broke my heart
You'll never know it
Cause I'll never show it
And it's not your fault
Hey, hey love
You broke my heart
You'll never believe me
Cause your heart doesn't see me
The way I do.

(Guitar solo)

You know, I'm just a fool
To let you walk back into my heart
I know you have no clue
Why there's pieces of me, without even you
But what am I to do?
You live in my mind, most all of the time
One thing I got for you
When you holding me near, it all seems so clear
Hey, hey love
You broke my heart
You'll never know it
Cause I'll never show it
And it's not your fault
Hey, hey love
You broke my heart
You'll never believe me
Cause your heart doesn't see me
The way I do.

zebrachikodoom
02-26-2003, 12:21 AM
actually i just got back from band practice and we were working on more music, thanks anyway

MrBungle
02-26-2003, 12:26 AM
any previews to send? That would be killer if it ends up a Randy tune!